A great affordable option, ideal for giving your manuscript a “check-up” before moving forward. There will be a substantive critique with in-line comments on the first chapter of your manuscript. Edits will address any big-picture problems as well as a line edit to fine-tune your wonderful work!​

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You may also submit one of the following instead:

• A one-page query letter

• An equivalent length synopsis

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Bundles:

$25 First Chapter

$50 First Chapter + Query Letter (one-page) OR Synopsis (not to exceed 3K words)

$100 First Chapter + Query Letter (one-page) + Synopsis (not to exceed 3K words)

This is the first overview of your completed manuscript. I will offer some broad, insightful feedback on major strengths and weaknesses in plot, characters, consistency, style, and structure.

 

You will receive a 1-page editorial letter of suggestions on how to fix.

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$0.01 per word ($100 minimum)

Detailed feedback on the big-picture issues, story structure, plot, world building, consistency, style, pacing, conflict, character development, and voice.

 

You’ll receive a 5-15 page in-depth editorial letter full of suggestions and how you can approach fixing things.

 

You will also get a marked up manuscript and a 1-hour follow-up call to discuss and brainstorm whatever you need!

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$.015 per word ($100 minimum)

This is where we fine-tune and look for anything that makes your manuscript less readable.

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This includes, word repetition, spelling, grammar, capitalization, word usage, dialogue tags, usage of numbers or numerals, point of views, tense, descriptive inconsistencies in character descriptions, locations, blocking, etc.

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$.0175 per word ($100 minimum)